User talk:L0mars01

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On Definition:Characteristic Function
Please refrain from outright deletion of material in the future. While it may be true that the definition for a relation is an instance of that for sets, this doesn't imply that there is no added value in mentioning the special case. A relation is conceptually a lot different from a set (while it still is one) and so the distinction is merited. In fact, even if there was only one source mentioning the specific definition for a relation, for completeness' sake we at PW would aim to include that definition. Compare Definition:Neighborhood (Metric Space) which is an instance of Definition:Neighborhood (Topology). Thank you for your anticipated cooperation. --Lord_Farin (talk) 07:52, 22 September 2012 (UTC)


 * I'll endorse this. There was a specific reason for including the definition for a relation: it was a crucial step along the way towards the Gödel theorems (still unfinished while I work on other stuff).
 * ProofWiki is not so much an encyclopedia, it is more akin a dictionary. As such it includes a lot of small details which would in a more discursive presentational strategy be ignored. Users have expressed delight at such inclusivity as it can provide essential clarification of intellectual stumbling-blocks. --prime mover (talk) 08:02, 22 September 2012 (UTC)


 * A good definition is concise and clear. The issue was the article presented a characteristic function for a relation apart from that for a set by recreating the entire definition. This is like defining 'telephone' and 'red telephone' separately, without saying a red telephone is 'a telephone that is red'. This is problematic to the reader on a number of grounds.
 * It doesn't say one 'definition' is derived from the other when it should. This misleads the reader ('you mean to tell me a red telephone is completely different from a telephone?') with the illusion they are logically unrelated, proper definitions and that distinct definitions are needed for completeness, which isn't clear or concise.
 * Logical consequences aren't definitions. A reader will reasonably expect the broadest definitions (possibly broken into parts) on the main page. To present a derived instance as a definition is either incorrect or a source of confusion to a reader reasonably expecting the broadest definitions. Either detracts from clarity. ('I looked up telephone. Why are you telling me about red telephones?')
 * This misleads a reader who would need to read through both 'definitions', and make the correct associations to discover the distinction was illusory when the author could have just told them. Such preventable guesswork diminishes clarity. ('Why did you write all of that instead of tell me a red telephone is a telephone that is red?') A better approach is to direct the reader to the set definition of a relation and tell them a characteristic function for a relation is one for a set. ('Red is color, a feature independent of telephones. A red telephone is a telephone. And it's red.') As a convenience, an author could present that instance of the general definition as a consequence, not a new definition as the original presentation's appearances suggest.
 * Extra information not clearly classified as such can burden a reader rather than help them. Redundancy creates 'noise' that detracts from brevity, and confuses a reader who doesn't yet know the statement is redundant and parses it very closely to 'comprehend the new idea'. As a result, they may either discover the redundancy and fault the author for not stating so before wasting their time ('Oh, a red telephone is just a telephone that is red. Thanks a lot, genius.'), OR trust the redundancy was meaningfully put there and waste their time testing for 'different' cases ('hrm, I guess red telephones aren't ordinary telephones.'). Neither is a service to the reader.
 * That, in abundantly verbose fashion, is why I felt the definition for relations needed to go or something different needed to be written in its place.--L0mars01 (talk) 02:36, 23 September 2012 (UTC)


 * I see your point and appreciate your taking the time over this. In your opinion, would it be sufficient to add somewhere near the top of the Relations page that the c.f. on a relation is a specific example of a c.f. on a set?
 * The base that I'm trying to cover is the one where the reader is following through a thread of thought (from an external source which may not have been clearly-enough written - I have encountered some of these) where the c.f. of a relation is introduced without the general "set" definition having been introduced previously. In that case this will derail a possibly-already-out-of-depth reader with a concept which, on the surface, does not correspond to that which he/she is reading. So the existence of the definition for "relation" is there, deliberately for that reason.
 * I confess that I fell into the trap of making the assumption that a reader will automatically get the fact that they are instances of the same thing - you're right of course, this needs to be made obvious. --prime mover (talk) 08:19, 23 September 2012 (UTC)